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  1. Devildude 1wk 3d ago

    Quote by jese-mxHi,

    (speak Spanish?
    because I was not English, and support me with a translator on-line.)

    It was not my intention to be critical, I was just giving my point of view.

    Possibly, I no longer have pactica in the drawings, (about 4 years ago or more that do not practice), but I still have my background as a cartoonist.

    Well, I hope my future comments will not bother you.

    ¡Ah, no, no me refería a eso.
    Estoy feliz de recibir sus comentarios.

    Usted es un humorista? Maravilloso, que significa que su experiencia debe ser mucho, y espero recibir más de su comentario.

    I used translater, hope that made sense.

  2. Devildude 1wk 4d ago

    Quote by jese-mxfeet are supposed to come out of the pelvis, but not adbomen.
    In this drawing it appears that her left foot, born of the abdomen

    must practice more with the folds. It is not necessary to put many to give an effect.

    You are correct, I only just noticed it, scary bit...

    Quote: - The neck is not centered in the chest. or one shoulder is smaller.
    - His right wrist it seems that it broke.

    The rest looks pretty good

    Sharp eyes... I think I pretty much did it all too quick.

    Quote: wow,

    I also want to meet:)

    Good design, this perfect, just have to practice more the fingers.

    and wow, thank you, this is the first comment from you that seemed non critical and picky, which is good to be picky because you show me mistakes I otherwise cannot see.
    Thank you.

  3. ala21ddin21 1wk 5d ago

    Oh ! So bad...

  4. ala21ddin21 1wk 6d ago

    Yeah, you need to participate in order to get scans ! ^^

    I like it better because it's more ordered and many of my friends are using it and keeping it's vectors exclusively there !

  5. ala21ddin21 2wk 0d ago

    Thank for the comment, I wite "for ANIMEPAPER.NET" because you can find there a higher resolution version and also a .PNG file!

  6. Devildude 3wk 4d ago

    yes I drew it, character design is stated multiple times, by Slaves.

    anime style, don't expect non deformity


    Quote by jese-mxI like.
    but seems to lose perspective on the pelvis.

    hyay to practice more foot

    Indeed, I am new to the barefoot department

    Quote by jese-mx breasts they need gravity. They are large (for body) and do not look good as well.

    If she is lying down, the breasts must be separated and fall sideways.
    if standing, must fall further down.

    I will, thanks for the tip, my breasts do need work.

    Quote by jese-mxsome breasts, make the drawing is not good.

    this is a case in point. The breasts are so large, that does not reveal the drawing.

    It was meant to be a joke, I suppose yes, it is horrid, they should show some softness.

    Quote by jese-mxhis right shoulder is deformed.
    or
    his left shoulder is too small.

    you should not mark both the muscles.
    those muscles of the pelvis, are well marked that seem artificial legs
    ---
    http://gallery.minitokyo.net/view/420533/
    the link, here I am back again.

    indeed, I corrected it wrongly, perhaps I need to rework this entire piece.

    Thank you so far for your critiques and comments, and your favorites.

  7. x-Hitodama-x 3wk 4d ago

    Quote by jese-mx eyelashes are too thick.
    you should leave some without contour lines.

    Thanks for your opinion, but I like them like that ^^

  8. ai-no-tenshi 4wk 3d ago

    http://s56.radikal.ru/i152/0911/4e/35bb7d76c012.gif

  9. Devildude 4wk 6d ago

    It is a style of drawing, I am not here to be concise with size elements and what's not.
    Thanks anyway. don't be so serious lol.

  10. Devildude 4wk 6d ago

    well, I am self trained, no formal education with arts etc.

    I suppose I do need that but then again, I am only doing this for fun. thanks.

  11. bdanime05 5wk 6d ago

    thanks for the comment on the Girls Bravo scan. Glad you liked it. :)

  12. tachibana53 6wk 6d ago

    thanxz for your comment,,,,,,
    i'm very glad,,,,you see my art work,,,,,,,,

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